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I think you had a good concept for your poem, it just needs to be tweaked here and there to make it flow better. Since I've only been writing poetry for a couple of months myself I don't know how much help I can be to you. I have written your poem using your ideas but how I would have worded it. I did it really quick as we have friends coming over for a BBQ, but it might give you something to think about. Send me you rewrite after you've tweaked it...Cheers, Faith
Your version:
She Sits.........
She sits steering out the window
looking at nothing at all,
While the rain hits the window
hiding her tears as they fall.
She sits reminishing, longing
of old days gone by
And how difficult life has gotten,
and how she like to die.
She sits hopeless, helpless, so
lost in herself,
And she hates what she has become
and everything else.
She sits trying to understand
these feeling erupting inside
There are no answers to find,
not matter how hard she tries.
She site has her mind continues
to swirl out of control,
So many problems, stresses and
hurts consuming her soul.
My Version:
She Sits....
She sits...staring out the rain streaked window, but she sees nothing at all, The raindrops hitting the window camouflage her tears as they fall.
She sits...quietly reminiscing of happier days gone by, Oh how difficult life has become and how easy it would be to give up & die.
She sits... alone and helpless hopelessly lost in herself, she hates what she has become, she wishes she was someone else.
She sits... trying to understand the emotions erupting within, but there are no easy answers and sadly no happy ever afters.
She sits... her mind slowly swirling out of control, So many problems,so many hurts consuming her very soul.
Thanks for stopping back by, I'd be happy to comment on your poems . It's taken me a long time to open up and while it may seem brave to expose myself publically, the reality is I'm not brave at all. My husband and family have really encouraged me to share my poetry. It's actually turned out real well, People have been kind, leaving nice messages such as yours. It's easier to spill my guts in front of strangers than it would be to tell people I know. On-line you're pretty anonymous. Please do e-mail me my addy is faith1539@msn.com Look forward to hearing from you....Faith
Hi Kendra. Just want to say thank you for all the advice. You have been an inspiration... still trying out a lot of it, but wanted to say it's appreciated!
hey girl.your space is so awesome!anyway got a question hope you can answer.how do i get the guestbook blog to not be showing with my other blogs.you got the same thing done with your guestbok but its not under your blogs so help me out please.
Hi Kendra i found the steps, but its in dutch only, so i translate them for you and will sent it to your email adress, because its much info.i believe i saw your email adress on your space
Hi Kendra, sorry that its bin some time, but my computer crashed about 2 weeks ago, and it good not be fixed, so i just bought a new one today.
to put flames or other graphics on your space, you have to put sandboxes on your space and you can make as many as you want, but unfortunately i don't have the website anymore where its explained how to do it since it was on my crashed computer, but i will try to find it again and get back to you
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